The stakes were bigger in this one, and I liked the way all the pieces fit together to both make this story work and move Kate forward in her own personal arc.
The mystery of Kate's origins will become tedious if it continues to be held out as a carrot for this reader. I want clues or for it not to be the burden Kate believes it will be.
I also want some personal growth. She needs to realize her relationships with others are a strength rather than a weakness.
I'm enjoying the universe/characters enough to keep reading. On to the third, which I've already loaded to my Kindle from the library!
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