Writing, characterization, grammar were all inconsistent, though grammar was mostly good. Some incorrect word usage - maybe three or four in the whole book, but distracting nonetheless. Promising variation on Greek gods and cupid. Though this was billed as a romance, romance was not really a part of the story until nearly the end. World building was average, not great. A lot of characters to keep track of, though the majority of the book was from Sebastian's POV. Sex was either wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am or fade-to-black. There was never really a good explanation of how the cupid/golden arrows work in this universe. Ending was extremely rushed and resolution was entirely too easy - made it pretty obvious that there is more to the story. I doubt I'll bother reading more in the series.
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